Never messing up rice balls with おにぎりを握る

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Hotaru and Komari agreed to trade homemade lunches while viewing the cherry blossoms. Komari’s lunch came out badly, with burnt noodles and a hamburger covered in melted chocolate, but Hotaru ate it anyway and insisted it was delicious. Now Komari offers her a rice ball, and Hotaru takes a bite and finds it good.

小鞠(こまり):
「私(わたし)お米(こめ)炊(た)くのは失敗(しっぱい)したことあるけどおにぎり握(にぎ)るのは失敗(しっぱい)したことないんだー」
“I've messed up cooking rice before, but I've never messed up making rice balls!”
Literal: “As for cooking rice, I have failed, but as for shaping rice balls, I have never failed.”
蛍(ほたる):
「おにぎりの中身(なかみ)なんですか?」
“What's in the rice balls?”
小鞠(こまり):
「んーとね 梅干(うめぼ)しとおかかとしゃけとかかな? お母(かあ)さんが作(つく)った野沢菜(のざわな)のもあるよ」
“Let's see... pickled plum, bonito flakes, salmon, that kind of thing? There's also one with the nozawana pickles my mom made.”
蛍(ほたる):
「へー 野沢菜(のざわな)ですか?」
“Oh, nozawana?”
「良(よ)かった… 普通(ふつう)だ…」
“Thank goodness... They're normal...”

Key Points

1おにぎりを握(にぎ)る = to make rice balls
  • 握(にぎ)る means to grip or squeeze. Rice balls are pressed into shape by hand, so Japanese says you 握(にぎ)る them. English “make” fits better in a translation.
  • The noun おにぎり comes from the same verb: お plus 握(にぎ)り, “something squeezed.”
  • Komari drops the particle を in both phrases: お米(こめ)炊(た)く and おにぎり握(にぎ)る. Casual speech often leaves out を.
2お米(こめ)を炊(た)く = to cook rice
  • 炊(た)く is the verb for cooking rice. Komari lines it up against 握(にぎ)る to separate the two steps. Cooking the rice is where she has gone wrong. Shaping it is where she never has.
3〜のは〜したことある・ない = as for doing ~, I have / have never failed
  • The の after each verb turns it into a noun phrase, and は makes that phrase the topic. With two topics side by side, the は also sets them in contrast.
  • 〜たことがある says something has happened at least once. 〜たことがない says it never has. Komari drops the が in both halves.
  • けど joins the two halves: “I’ve failed at this, but not at that.”
4Ending with んだー
  • んだ presents the last part as something Komari wants Hotaru to know. The stretched ー makes it sound pleased and a bit proud.
5おにぎりの中身(なかみ)なんですか? = What’s in the rice balls?
  • なん here is 何(なん), “what”, not explanatory んです. The full question is おにぎりの中身(なかみ)は何(なん)ですか, with は dropped.
6〜とかかな? = things like ~, I think?
  • とか marks the list as examples, not a full list. かな adds that Komari isn’t quite sure.
  • お母(かあ)さんが作(つく)った野沢菜(のざわな)の is “the one with nozawana my mom made.” The final の stands in for おにぎり.
7良(よ)かった… 普通(ふつう)だ… = Thank goodness… They’re normal…
  • Hotaru says this in her head. After the chocolate-covered hamburger, she’s relieved the fillings are ordinary ones.

Vocabulary

(I)

私(わたし) means “I” or “me”. It is the standard first-person pronoun in polite speech and is also common in casual speech among women.

(Rice)

お米(こめ) is uncooked rice, the grains before they are cooked. The お makes it sound polite and gentle, and most speakers use it in everyday talk. Once cooked, rice is called ご飯(はん).

(To cook rice)

炊(た)く is to cook rice or other grains by boiling them until the water is absorbed, as in ご飯(はん)を炊(た)く. In western Japan, it also means to simmer other foods.

(Failure)

失敗(しっぱい) is not getting the result one tried for. It covers a small slip as well as a plan that falls through. It takes する.

(To do)

する is to do or perform something. It also turns many nouns into verbs, as in 勉強する.

(Thing)

こと is an abstract thing, matter, or fact, as opposed to a physical object. It also turns a verb phrase into a noun, as in 見たことがある. It is also written 事(こと).

(To exist)

ある is to exist or be in a place, for things and plants rather than people or animals. It also means to have something, or for an event to take place.

(Rice ball)

おにぎり is rice pressed into a triangle or round shape, often with a filling and wrapped in seaweed.

(To grip)

握(にぎ)る means to grip or squeeze something in your hand. It is also the verb for shaping food by hand, as in おにぎりを握(にぎ)る or 寿司(すし)を握(にぎ)る, and for holding power or control, as in 権力(けんりょく)を握(にぎ)る.

(Contents)

中身(なかみ) is what is inside a container. It is also what a person or thing is really like under the surface.

(Pickled plum)

梅干(うめぼ)し is a Japanese plum (ume) salted and dried until it is very sour. It is a common filling for rice balls and a standard part of a lunch box.

(Bonito flakes)

おかか is finely shaved dried bonito (かつお節(ぶし)), often mixed with soy sauce. It is a common rice ball filling.

(Salmon)

しゃけ is salmon, especially as food. It is a casual pronunciation of さけ, and both are written 鮭(さけ). Salted, grilled salmon is a standard rice ball filling.

(Mom)

お母(かあ)さん is a polite, warm word for mother. Children use it to call their own mother, and it also refers to someone else’s mother.

(To make)

作(つく)る means to create or prepare something.

(Nozawana)

野沢菜(のざわな) is a leafy green in the turnip family, usually eaten pickled. It is a specialty of Nagano Prefecture.

(Good)

良(よ)い describes something good or proper. 良かった means “I’m glad” or “it was good”.

(Ordinary)

普通(ふつう) describes what is usual and unremarkable, neither special nor odd. 普通(ふつう)に is used loosely for honestly or just normally.

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